Revised Pitch and Explanation (we could have done better)😨😨😨

So Timmy and I presented our automatic dog door pitch to Harry Alford and he was very pleased with our idea. He did however touch on the fact that there was one slide that a picture was showing text but was very hard to read. We ended up blowing the picture up more in our revision and now it is easier to read. Another thing he touched on is how Timmy and I did not explain how the door actually works. We cannot add a slide in for that but if we were able to present it again we know we would get it right this time. Lastly, we reworded our market slide so that the wording shows you why there is a demand for a dog door as the trend of small dogs has increased. We will get this right next time!!!